Monday, September 7, 2009

What I'm thinking when I am thinking about power

Basically I want to explain the general idea of what I might do. This idea is hereby taken and cannot be used unless I say that I will not be doing it. 

When the topic was raised for the project I stumbled around in my head about power relationships and the obvious ones were all there. I didn't feel very connected to any of those. So I thought about what I power relationship I have direct experience with. Technology. So I thought about how technology has changed my life. I thought about the what it has helped me with and what it has hindered me with. I conjured up two images in my head that I want to recreate in a story with illustrations. 

The images: 
I saw a young adult sitting at a desk. On the desk was a computer. He was typing or searching the web. There were cables snaking around the chair and up behind his head where they where plugged in. More cables descended down and wrapped around his wrists and ankles effectively making him a marionette. 
The other image was of a peaceful and quiet village. The people there bartered and traded for everything. Money was rarely used. But crawling all around the village was an army of cell phones, pda's, laptops, digital cameras, iPods, and many other things. They were stalking the people. It was moments before war. 

Digital Revolution

Brian pulled out his desk chair and sat down. He opened the laptop. The screen blinked on and filled the dark room. Stretched shadows grew bold on the far wall. He clicked the internet icon. A window popped up displaying subject lines for three unread emails. A "read now" bubble flashed red. Brian closed the window. He clicked on his music files. The folder came up but was eclipsed with the email window again. 
"Dumb computer's trying to make me do stuff again," Doug, Brian's friend, had said a couple of nights ago at a bar. 
"What kind of things?" Brian had said.
"Darn thing keeps flashing my unread messages until I read them. And yesterday it wouldn't let me turn it off. Said it was updating or something," Doug had said. 
"Did you try pressing the power button until it turned off?" Brian had said.
"I'm not an idiot. I swear it is watching what I do. Listen. I think we are about to be taken over or something," Doug had said. 
"Not your digital revolution conspiracy," Brian had said.
"Just like the industrial revolution. It was pushed on those people then too," Doug had said.
Brian shook his head and closed the email window again. Again it popped up. The cursor slowly moved over to the subject line. Brian stared at the mouse connected to his laptop and his unmoving hand on it. "No," he breathed. 
Brian put his hands on the desk and pushed back. The rolling chair didn't move. He lifted his hand to the small power button next to the screen and pressed it. He pressed it again. Nothing happened. Brian pulled the screen down and out of the back of the computer were several thin metal flexible tubing running toward the wall and down to the floor. 
The metal tubing was wrapped around his ankles and chair. More tubes shot around Brian's wrists and pulled them away from the computer. The screen righted itself. Brian pulled against the tubes. They pulled back. 
"Now Brian, no use to struggle," a sweet female voice issued from the speakers. 
"What? Let me go," Brian pulled harder. A drop of blood ran down one of the tubes from his wrist. 
Three more tubes with tiny drills snaked up behind his head. The drills started spinning. Each one had a shrill high pitched noise. 
"What's that? Where's that noise coming from," Brian said.
"Relax, Brian," the computer said. 

10 comments:

  1. I really enjoyed the concept of a 'technological' take-over. There is a lot to play with in that field. Topics such as lost-humanity, what it means to be human, what type of 'work' is best left to humans, and what constitutes the politics of technology are all very interesting and timely topics to explore. I would suggest that in your telling of the story you look at how you give ownership to dialogue. For example in your story you currently have it set-up in the fashion of: "quote", (character's name) had said. It may be beneficial to look at different ways of giving ownership to the the dialogue so that the reading of the story is more fluid and the reader isn't distracted by all the 'had said"'s. I look forward to seeing where you go with these ideas. Good luck!

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  2. Q,

    Reading this gave me chills - especially when you described the young man typing as a marionette, a puppet for technology to play with. I think that this kind of dependency is one that runs rampant in our society. I found it particularly interesting that you related it to the industrial revolution. That was an extremely traumatic historical event that changed people and society forever. There were all kinds of disastrous side effects that we're still feeling in global cultures -- labor issues, environmental issues. Connecting these two historical events implies that the digital revolution will involve similar societal problems, but also provoke complex issues. The industrial revolution brought about the beginnings of workers' unions and unified feminist movements. There's all kinds of stuff -- cultural, intellectual and emotional -- you can play with.

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  3. As soon as I read your image of the computer snaked around a man's arms and legs like a marionette I thought of our discussion in class the other day about machines replacing people's jobs. During the industrial revolution, many people were out of work due to the machine (for example: the song we listened to about the shoe maker). I think you have a great idea going. The "Digital Revolution" is a perfect power issue between humans and machines and from reading your work in other classes I know this is will be a wild story if you continue. You have a big imagination and I say definitely go with the first image and not the second.

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  5. I love it! It's a topic I've so often thought about myself over the years - it's just so widespread that any reader would have to be engaged via their own experiences.

    The beautiful thing about it is that you've bypassed the obvious relationships that spring to mind when the word "power" is thrown around and found something that is so simple yet so effective. The image of the marionette is so vivid (as I sit tangled in my own chords)... seems like it would make for a perfect hook and symbol. From there it has to connect so easily with revolution that it seems like a lay-up.

    There are so many ways to go with this because of the darkness of humanity exposed during and since the Industrial Revolution. Humanity at times still seems to be extremely ignorant to the dangers of technology.

    Maybe it would be interesting to go in a sort of direction where the technology doesn't necessarily physically "revolt", but nonetheless possesses us without us realizing. Just around campus you can't go anywhere without running into a cell phone ordeal. Technology has taken away our jobs. Technology has simplified our lives, but it has made us more isolated. We can't go five minutes without having some kind of activity going on - tv noise, checking Twitter, text messages... and what's striking is just how meaningless all these gestures are. It's almost like an addiction.

    Or perhaps a singular point of view? Somehow, try to make it unique so it's not like the I, Robot movie, I'd say.

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  6. Well besides the fact that I wanted to do this idea....so good thing you made the disclaimer at the beginning, I thought this was a great start. I have always enjoyed reading your pieces, and I feel like this fits in with your style well. It may sound a bit morbid for me to say this, but I found the part about the drops of blood coming out of his wrists to be the best or at least most vivid and chilling part of the piece. I think that until that point, I was aware that it was a fictional situation. When you brought in the aspect of the pain, the scene seemed a bit more realistic no matter the impossibility of the scenario.

    I thought you did a nice job with the idea of technology taking over the world, and I enjoyed the details you used to create the scene. I felt as though I was there through your use of sensory details. I heard the drills. I heard the woman's voice. I felt the pain of the cords on the wrists and ankles.

    I would be interested to see more of the Doug character. Did he experience this too? Is there a place that Brian will be taken to as some kind of sci-fi transformed person, or is the technology going to kill him? It is hard to ask these questions because I know that this is only a portion of your final project and a draft at that. I feel like you could maybe go into greater detail before this scene, showing the gradual increase of technology in society that led to this "war" as you call it as well. Anyway, I hope this helps a little, and I can't wait for you to keep going! Good luck, Lassiter!

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  8. Hey, so I'm writing this again, since it failed to post the other day.

    When I first read this I immediately thought of 1984 by Orwell and Harrison Bergeron by Vonnegut. It is a very mind provoking topic, considering this is becoming more and more of an issue everyday. Will there ever be a limit to the amount of technology available to us? Is there a possibility our world will regress instead of progress because of it? The war that you talk about happens everyday to everyday people. For example, my dad's business recently got the new iPhones for their means of company communication. My dad highly dislikes new technology like that, and deems it very unnecessary. Now he has to give into that sort of new age technology and learn how to use the damn phone. On the other side of that, he owns a printing company, so he also benefits by the new laser printers and hi-tech press sheets that come out. It is a battle between the new and the old, and what will make your life better or worse.
    Play around with these two contrasting ideas, because that is another form of "the war."
    I think you have a great start here. What kind of medium are you going to use to take your project further? Are you going to use any sort of technology? Obviously you already did by posting it to this blog site. You could use technology to your benefit to enhance the point behind your story.
    Good luck! Can't wait to see more.

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  9. Posting this for Will:

    Lassiter, I'm not sure where you are going with the story but I do think the themes you are experimenting with are well worth examining. If you continue with the story though I'm not sure how well those themes would be explored. I feel like if you actually have computers animate and come to life you could lose your point in something that is hard to buy into. If you have time, and I know it's probably hard to find time to read, but you should look at the book Player Piano by Kurt Vonnegut. He definitely delves into some of the themes you seem interested in exploring. Technology is a huge part of everyone's lives, and trying to explain or explore the power it has over us or our relationship to it is a great idea. I hope this develops further and you can make it your own.

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  10. Quinton! I know I posted on this because I talked to you about it in class! (I wonder if using a lab computer effects what posts successfully and what doesn't..)

    Anyway - a little late now, but we discussed how the similarity of ideas would make for a good mesh. Your stories have a much more visceral feel to them, coming from a time in this technological revolution where the merging of man and machine is still a hack-and-slash process, all scorched flesh and jacked-in wires and diodes. it's gritty, it's scary, I love it. I can smell the oil and copper and burning hair from here.

    I hope your story with Doug and Fara (love that name, Fara) is progressing smoothly. Looking forward to the finished product.

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